Guns firing
Shells hit the ground
Bombs blasting
Why isn’t there sound?
Bodies falling
Lives drift away
Tanks rolling
And so ends the day
Another day of fear
Another day of loss
For months they march here
For months they cross
A never-ending conflict
A bewildering cause
Commanders remain strict
If only it could pause
The morals of men disappear
Their fears temporarily lost
Through blood and sweat they persevere
But at what price? What cost?
In the name of their nation
They embarked on this crusade
The fee of this journey:
A sin that cannot be repaid
Families at home can only pray
For those who boarded
And that they will live another day
Rather than die and be rewarded
Why is there war?
Must we always fight?
Is talking so useless,
To end this plight?
So war come and goes we are meant for war but meant for so much more....
sorry about the rhyme
I wrote a song/poem thing about war entitled "Hypocrisy"
Check it out!
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and maybe look at some of my other stuff while your there. >.>
I read yours and thought it was really good. I liked the repetition of "loyalty is all that remains" especially.
"The morals of men disappear
Their fears temporarily lost
Through blood and sweat they persevere
But at what price? What cost?"
That was my favorite part.