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Guns firing
Shells hit the ground
Bombs blasting
Why isn’t there sound?

Bodies falling
Lives drift away
Tanks rolling
And so ends the day

Another day of fear
Another day of loss
For months they march here
For months they cross

A never-ending conflict
A bewildering cause
Commanders remain strict
If only it could pause

The morals of men disappear
Their fears temporarily lost
Through blood and sweat they persevere
But at what price?  What cost?

In the name of their nation
They embarked on this crusade
The fee of this journey:
A sin that cannot be repaid

Families at home can only pray
For those who boarded
And that they will live another day
Rather than die and be rewarded

Why is there war?
Must we always fight?
Is talking so useless,
To end this plight?
:iconsamara-chan:
I just did this today for an extra credit english project. ^^; Poetry is not my forte [but 's is! check her poems out!] so this isn't wonderful....I get so ticked about America's involvement in Iraq that it sends me off the deep end sometimes. ^^; I'm not anti-American--I'll support the war [not paying a cent tho']--but I'm not for it.

I think the part about praying will piss off the school with the whole anti-every-religion-even-though-they-teach-us-them thing. ^^; Eh heh....rambling again I know.

Please comment and tell me waht you think!
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~Le-Cliff-World Mar 21, 2013  New member Student Writer
its hopeless to end war with people that are stubborn and ignorant......

So war come and goes we are meant for war but meant for so much more....

sorry about the rhyme
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~Satoron Mar 1, 2013  New member Hobbyist Writer
Neat
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*Amaterasu-Hanako Mar 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
what do you mean its not good? i loved every second of it faving!
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:iconnovelist888:
I am looking for writers, who are interested in science-fiction.
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:icontehpyramidheadfan:
Wonderful. I absolutely love it :D.

I wrote a song/poem thing about war entitled "Hypocrisy"

Check it out!
[link]

and maybe look at some of my other stuff while your there. >.>
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:iconsamara-chan:
Thank you! :)

I read yours and thought it was really good. I liked the repetition of "loyalty is all that remains" especially.
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:iconjbroebroe:
I see where you say are words uesless no ther not. But when words fail like in irackes case we said get out or we will force you out of qwate . And ther words dident work bulets did. I give you a 10 out of 10
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:iconchristheoffroader:
Dude WOW ..... WOW.
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:iconsamara-chan:
Thank you for the comment and fave! I'm glad you liked it :)
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:iconlilyofseattle:
Wow, I thought that was really great! Totally agree.

"The morals of men disappear
Their fears temporarily lost
Through blood and sweat they persevere
But at what price? What cost?"

That was my favorite part.
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